deviant art

Deviant Login Shop
 Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
[x]
more ▶

More from =Daghrgenzeen

Featured in Groups:

Details

March 2
Sta.sh Writer
Link
Thumb

Statistics

Comments: 11
Favourites: 2 [who?]

Views: 55 (0 today)
[x]
You lead me into a room of hazy, flickering
lights, no windows, only a chair in the middle
and you tell me to sit down, on the chair in
splinters. I feel a pinch of pain but utter no
complaint. The door is behind your back, and
even if you didn't bind me with these straps
and chains, I know I wouldn't try run off, past.
You force your fingers through the corners
of my mouth, part my jaws so I can't bite
them off like sausages. My tongue moves;
I drool on your rubber-gloved skin. I can't
stand rubber, it disgusts me and you know
it so well. You bend down as if to kiss, our
mouths barely touching but it's still enough
and electrifying. You breathe out, from the
bottom of your lungs, your spirit reaching
out to meet mine. It's dark, dark grey and
pollution green, and I can't but take it in.
Tasteless, painless. You step back, away
from me, let me go, looking at me, look at
me. I thought I'd choke when that smog
got into my airpipe, somehow I don't feel
like choking until I try to speak. That's when
glossy foam begins to form like I had rabies,
bursting out instead of the words I meant.
We stare into each other's eyes in fruitless
silence. Passion scrubs off, but venom stays.
:icondaghrgenzeen:
Written on March 2, 2013.

This was not inspired by Alice Cooper - Poison but when I was finished with this, that's what I ended up thinking about... heh. I dunno, something that came up while I was watching TV with mom. =P
Add a Comment:
 
love 0 0 joy 1 1 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconabalex:
~ABAlex Apr 8, 2013  New member
Well this is different. Not usually something I would read, but interesting none the less. It is well written and I enjoyed your use of vocabulary.
Reply
:icondaghrgenzeen:
=Daghrgenzeen Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:thanks:
Reply
:iconamino47:
Mood: Joy ~amino47 Mar 12, 2013  New member
thumb up girl (y) Who is that
Reply
:icondaghrgenzeen:
=Daghrgenzeen Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Who is who? :o
Reply
:iconinfinite-heart:
`Infinite-Heart Mar 6, 2013   General Artist
Very powerful and spooky!
Reply
:icondaghrgenzeen:
=Daghrgenzeen Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :la: And thank you for the faves! :love:
Reply
:iconinfinite-heart:
`Infinite-Heart Mar 7, 2013   General Artist
:tighthug:
Reply
:iconcibian:
~Cibian Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
this is....uh...different o.o;
Reply
:icondaghrgenzeen:
=Daghrgenzeen Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I've become rather experimental lately, eh? :lol:
Reply
:iconcibian:
~Cibian Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
hmm...that's true. Keeps things interesting =3
Reply
Add a Comment: